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By: Mish_Lady

Mish_Lady — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 18:50:15 +0000

I also noticed something-not many Ergonian men seem to have beards. Some do, of course, but….Mentl seems to be one of the few-if not the only-one with facial fuzz.

By: MaxBigfoot

MaxBigfoot — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 17:24:44 +0000

I guess I’m showing my age, but the song that first panel brought to mind for me was “Hippy Hippy Shake”. I love the exchange of looks between the ladies and men, too. Great strip.

By: Mish_Lady

Mish_Lady — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 14:38:00 +0000

JED, very nice! I also like the sheerness of Tula’s skirt. You definitely have the hang of posing now!

Hwyla, I also think it is partly stress from our world, and the stress of not only adjusting to the world he’s in now, but most likely killing his first person. Well, if you can call Ginsha a “person.” I also got the feeling that Mentl is a true gentleman, and the fact that he beat a woman (possibly to her death) really got to him. Also, the idea that he has this powerful magick that he has inside of him must also be a shocker.

By: Deris

Deris — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 14:11:58 +0000

I almost missed the text just under the first panel. Had to adjust Gama to read it too. I thinh the answer is: Ah, work it all baby! (work, work) Well, you’re drivin’ me crazy.

By: Uhl

Uhl — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 11:56:11 +0000

I think it’s a nice juxtapositon going where Zona is holding her chest and in the next frame, Mentl’s got a goofy look on his face.

By: ebony1442

ebony1442 — Tue, 13 Apr 2010 00:07:54 +0000

Soulworker, I think it’s more of a “Shake Your Groove Thing” than “Can You Feel the Love Tonight?” No mice were involved in this production, after all.

By: Nimue

Nimue — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 07:43:34 +0000

Damn, great page! I like the feeling of the night.
What are they wearing? I want one of these suits! (Or I’d want if I had somewhere to wear it :p)

By: Inquisitive Raven

Inquisitive Raven — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 04:28:41 +0000

@Hwyla: I have the impression that there are women spaced all the way around the fire, so the one on Zona’s left was always there, but just outside the frame before.

By: Hwyla

Hwyla — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 03:05:46 +0000

JED - Beautiful! The ladies are so graceful and yet - at the same time - I can feel the beat and hip thrusts. Altho’ I’d like to know where that lady on Zona’s left came from in the first panel. You cheated a bit there - but it’s all good - that puts Zona in the center of panel 1. I’ll just pretend she jumped into the dance late.

I second the masterly handling of Tula’s sheer skirt - I’m going to assume that was at least a little bit tough - even tho’ you keep saying you just pose them. However, I’m surprised at Mentl’s crows feet - yeak - firelight can kinda emphasize that sort of thing, but he looks like his 10 years older than Zona - maybe even closer to her mother’s age. I’m just going to choose to believe that OUR world was highly stressful to his him - after all, living in your car ought to stress out anyone.

By: Professor 61771

Professor 61771 — Mon, 12 Apr 2010 01:11:06 +0000

Simply Lovely
Now In Desperate Need of a Bonfire
Thank Gods the season is starting